Time management

I have already started to re-work my work from last year as I have started re-writing my main article as last year I used a question and answer format and feel that to raise higher grades I need to go for a more professional format and so have gone for a format similar to YOU.com magazine as they produce their text as if their audience were in the room by first off telling people what the audience is wearing, where they have just came from before coming to the interview and then getting into a more relaxed interview as the interviewer will use quotes from what the celebrity has said and then add some more body to it so that the reader can understand why the interviewee has said such things.